The underneath is my composition, Please the each helping I rectify the phrasing.  Thank you very much!  

My labor's day
    The expectant Labor Day arrived at finally,we can
take a break finally.  The seldom several days
holidays, I want to play a fully enjoy.  
    The first day, I'm going to Yiwu.  I by train, Set
out from Shanghai, by way of Jiaxing and Hangzhou.  The
scenery in the journey is very beautiful, There is many
hills, But not how many waters, My happpy mood did not
therefore suffer the influence, Because I'm not to like
the water very much, Especially big river.
    Keep in mind the strange and pleased mood, I
arrived Yiwu.  The many people says,  Yiwu become
famous because of small merchandise, I approve very
much now, However the night that I like it.  I live the
neighborhood in hills, Air is very good, But there is a
lot of insectual.  The sunlight is very strong there
sevral days, Usually in the daytime of time, I sleeping
in house, The nightfall go to play.  Very quick a week
passde by.  
    The holidays be over,  I felt not how happy,  But I
hope that I can to breathe the air on the hills again.
Expect the labor day of the next year.